[Celtore]: 126.I've Given Up

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2008-01-02 00:12:46

[Celtore]: 126.What You Did To My Heart

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Im not going to try
No more lies
And no more crying
The love it there
But the hurt is strong
I don’t want to hear it
I just want to scream
Leave me alone to cry
Just let me die
I don’t want to hear your stupid lies
I gave up on you, no more trying.

2008-01-22 bloody kisses: Wow. The emotion here was very apparent, and it broke harder with each line. I'm pretty sure many many people can relate to this and you put all their emotion in that short poem.

Now that's something to honor!

*leaves an arse load of brownies*

2008-01-28 Celtore: *Giggles* Thanks!