[Jenna Rose]: 150.Poetry.Something There

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Angst

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poetry

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Something There
_{Copyright © Jennifer J. Radford

Written: Nov 25, 2007}

When I first met you,
I couldn’t stand you.
Yet, there was something there.

On our first date,
I saw a different side of you.
Yes, there was something there.

Our very first kiss,
Made my heart stop.
Definitely, there was something there.

The first time we made love,
Everything seemed so magical.
There was something there, and strong.

After our last ‘conversation’,
I cried so hard I couldn’t breathe.
There was still something there.

And now that you’re gone...
Every time you cross my mind,
My heart and stomach ache.

There’s still something there.

_{The only part I don't really like of this, is the 3rd line of the 3rd stanza; "Definitely, there was something there." I don't like 'definitely' being there, but can't think of anything to replace it.}