[kileaiya]: 172.Uninspired Musings-Poems.broken

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2006-02-02 19:50:53
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Broken
You cannot bend me
for I am bent
you cannot break me
for I am already broken
I lay here a shattered soul
worn from life's errosion
Pieces of me are missing
I am not fully whole
I have the scars of battle
too numerous to count
I wear them like a soldier
out for all to see
I am a 5 star general
a prisoner of an internal war
cut down to the size of a mouse


© Jordan Mason 2005, all rights reserved

2006-02-07 mousepoet: The last line is great, I quite like it. Well, the last three lines, I suppose, are my favorite.

2006-02-08 kileaiya: Thank you! Any chance you like it because it contains mouse? XD

2006-02-08 mousepoet: ^_^ Nope. But funny coincidence, eh?

2006-02-10 kileaiya: Hehe, yeah. :)


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