2006-10-22 Nell: This is an older example of my forrays into poetry. In this one you can see how I started doing different styles in one poem.[Nell]: 226.Poetry.Let
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How are you?
How do they treat you?
Do you feel like me?
Do they never let you be?
Dear Susie,
I think they watch my every movement.
I feel as though they have put a camera
Beneath the glass I look into each day
To see what reflects there in my eyes.
Dear Susie,
Today I find my diary lies feet from where I left it.
Why do they do it?
Why do they read it?
Are they scared of me?
Dear Susie,
The letter you sent to me,
Was found partly torn.
They leave me no privacy,
I feel used and worn.
Dear Susie,
I need to confront them.
If I don't I will surely loose my mind.
I hope they will listen,
I'll try to understand and listen too.
Dear Susie,
All is well.
All is fine.
How are you?
How do they treat you?
What do you think happened when the narrator confronted 'them'? Does it feel like it resolved happily, or possibly not? I want to get a sense of how you felt afterwards.