[shadow in the midst]: 279.Always Remember

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Do you even remember
The memories that we had bared
The times which we have loved and lost
The moments which we shared

Do you ever miss me
Thinking of me night's length
Wondering if we will ever be
Or if you have the strength

Do you want to call me
Just touch the phone and back away
Wishing you could talk to me
But not knowing what to say

Well I know I want to see you
I think of you all of the time
Theres nothing more that I could wish
Than for you to be all mine...

But times are past, things are gone
You're no longer there to hold
So I try to forget and move on
My love so cheaply sold

I just wish once more for a guys touch
To as sweetly grace my hand
So my standards deteriorate
And so many have reached my demand

So... "I miss you and I love you
I wish you were here with me
Nothings the same, against all hope
Bring me back Dear Insanity."

2006-10-26 Mister Saint: Spiffy. This sets a solid tone throughout. Really pulling off the 'downward spiral' is tough in short writing, but you've done a pretty good job of it. ^_^

2006-10-29 shadow in the midst: aww thanks.:P i appreciate it.


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