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2006-02-13 raven: Not bad......keep up the good work.. 2006-02-17 RiddleRose: i feel like these three chapters could be one... or that the first could be a prologue perhaps? i like the young man rebelling against his father. nice! perhaos a little abrupt... you might have a fight between father and son? or maybe that's too cliche. well, good work! i want more by the way... >.<[Fuzzysabeast]: 282.The Legend of Astaria.Chapte
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