[=Φ.Φ=]: 296.Trapped

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2006-01-30 17:26:42
 
Keywords:
I think I love her...
Genre:
Comedy
Style:
poetry
Left inside a heart of stone
Devotion's kiss of pain
Enticed by blood to stand alone
Avoiding sorrow's reign

Trapped within the promise made
To stand and wait for you
I swore to stand against the blade
And keep you from it too

Alone at night, I cry my tears
And think of you and I
And how our promise tempts my fears
As softly as I sigh

Yet trust alone relives my heart
And loving eyes reflect
The shattered shield torn apart
A heart she can't reject

2006-02-06 Talenya: It’s a bit sad how you ended the poem, but rather well written. It makes me feel as though I’m part of it, not just the reader. It flows well. ^_^


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