[dominique a]: 41.poetry- Never Again

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[never again]

where is my anger?
Where is my wit?
Where is my pride?
Where did it go?
For the first time ever
no words will come out
I'm speechless, I'm no one
I want you to know
Never before and never again
Will i let anyone have me twisting within
Take over my all
then do as they please
sink into my heart
and rest there in peace
Nothing less, nothing more
than the greatest change of all
the deepest of my fears
you just crashed all my walls
From then on I'm different
never the same
For the first time I'm me
for the first time I am
Never before.
Never again.

(March 27, 2005)

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Shir.

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2007-05-01 Eleanor: I like the rhythm of this. It’s like you start going and you can’t stop, like when you’re angry and you have to just let it all out until it’s spent. Editorial remarks: You’ve misspelled speechless as “speachless”, and sometimes you’ve capitalized first person “I” and sometimes you haven’t. It’s little inconsistencies like that that draw our attention away from what you are saying and focus it on the problems.

2007-05-02 bloody kisses: Wow, I know exactly how this feels, and I love how you expressed the emotion in the poem. It seemed free of "I need you" - as most of poems such as these end up showing - and motioned more towards "Leave me the freak* alone." A good form of presentation in my over-stressed opinion... I really enjoyed this one!

2007-05-03 dominique a: Thanks! I like that you said it isn't like MOST poems... that alone is enough of a complement!!

2007-05-07 bloody kisses: Hehe, it's what all writers strive for, and you acheived it, so you should definatly take that as a compliment 8)

See, one thing people actually see my writings for, is because I often write about death...apparently i'm really creative with it lol

2007-05-07 dominique a: Well... Isn't death a most importand part of life?

2007-05-07 bloody kisses: *Nods* But apparently people don't like me talking about Death as a succubus half the time, because in my opinion she seduces men to take their souls. That's why most women that are straight die very...oddly? You know, trying to save her kid from putting a fork in the toaster, failing and pushing it in farther electocuting herself, or accidently getting shoved in the washer at a laundry mat.

Then there's other time's I actually write about the above ^.^

2007-05-08 dominique a: There is not a whole lot you can write about that could possibly be unacceptable! I think outrageous knowledge shoved into the minds of people who refused to accept it is how humanity over time grows out of its ignorance.

2007-05-08 bloody kisses: Hehe, very good point =}