2007-05-14 Eleanor: Oh, I love this. I can relate, especially to the green in the tourists’ faces. I’ve been there, done that, for sure. One note: the word for where a ship docks is berth, not birth, for obvious reasons. ;-) 2007-05-15 pirate witch: thanks, I can't believe I didn't catch that. 2007-05-15 Ash: I love the sea! I'll rate it a 7/9. Good job. 2007-05-16 pirate witch: thank you very much.[pirate witch]: 524.Poetry.Abo
Rating: 0.35
Sea Salt
in my hair
stays there for weeks.
After the creaking of the deck,
and the sound of wind in the sails,
(flapping like the wings of the gulls above)
are gone.
The spray hits my face,
the rope, and the dog who sits at the helm.
I can stand.
And swagger up and down
the wooden deck,
giving orders to tourists,
who stay seated.
Green in their faces.
I can pull the rope,
and raise canvas.
The ship isn’t mine,
but the ocean is.