[bloody kisses]: 558.Creative Void (short stories & poems).And Thy's Fear is Dubbed : Loneliness

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It's meant to run on, it's about a girl's confusion about who she is on her own, I really don't wan this one critiqued much, this is a personal poem actually...enjoy? lol...

The butterfly
up in the sky
soars gracefully
too high
for your touch
too close to be gone
too rotten to be noticed
to fake to be not...
but all anyone sees
is her confidence freed
though it's not hers exactly
yet everyone thinks they need
an ego such as
the one she bears
but no one looks hard
enough to see she wears
and uses it; strong
too strong to be wrong
too wrong to be gone long
too shy to entrust
the right people
so they take her : they drop her
in a place like Hell
to her it always will
be no where to run to
but she's met others
who feel for her - who worry
they've been in worse
and don't want her to be
but all you'll see
is an elegant butterfly
colourful, graceful,
but always too blind
always too wrong
tried to bind
tried to hold on
but no one holds
her back without
wanting more...
so look up at an
illusion so realistic
believe you want
to be her
the butterfly
close up
has broken wings
so look up
so look up
so look up...
she's there
she's free
but not from herself
she's all you need
but not what you want
a butterfly
in the sky
you can't touch
or notice she's blind...


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