[An Elven Song]: 627.Poetry.The Worst Mistake of Her Life

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The little girl was thinking hard, she just Couldn’t make up her mind
Did she want the mean little puppy
Or the kitten that was so kind?
She wanted a puppy all of her life
So her mind was in such a strife.
She took them both, and when they got in a Fight,
Tt was the worst mistake of her life
 
The preteen girl just couldn’t think
Which boy that she liked more
She wanted them both to be her guy
'Cuz alone they were such a bore
She thought about Owen and she stared at Jim
She couldn’t seem to choose between them
She took them both and when they found out,
It was the worst mistake of her life
 
The teenage girl was out of her mind
She wanted to drink yet she wanted to drive
Consequences ran blood deep
She wanted the liquor, she wanted the keys
Her friends tried to save her but it was too Late
She drunkenly staggered on to meet her fate
Because the girl just couldn’t choose
She had nothing but her life to lose
She took them both, and when she crashed
Tt was the worst mistake of her life
Tt was the most painful mistake of her life
It was the end of her life.

2007-01-22 kumquat: This is really good :].
I'll admit, when I started
reading it I was like
Hmm...puppy eh?
But...It's really well written,
and I loved the dramatic ending.
The line about having nothing
but her life to lose is my fave.

xxxloafxxx


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