[Taylor]: 628.Attempt at Haiku.Embrace

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2007-04-25 17:57:01

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Clouds flooded the sky
and the rain started to pour
to embrace mere flesh.

2008-10-23 Ash: This is really pretty, good job on it. This is what modern haikus are supposed to be like. 9/9

2008-12-28 PhoenixV: except in that true haikus are in chinese.
english haikus are not true ones...
at least so some people think =P