[Taylor]: 628.Free verse.Puppet master

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Taylor

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2007-05-23 18:52:23

[Taylor]: 628.Free verse.Promise me forever

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[Taylor]: 628.Free verse

[Taylor]: 628.Free verse.on the verge of disappointment

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Lost love

You pull the strings
A simple movement of your hands
Makes me feel alive
Lift me up, let me fall
You’ve attached the strings to my heart now
Tear me apart, put me back together
I’ll do anything you want me to
Lie to me; tell me what I need to hear
Maybe I like it
Can’t say a word, mouth sewn shut
You've tossed me away
Finding another heart to toy with
I’m useless to you now
Hanging on by a thread
Waiting for you to come back

2007-05-28 Ash: I felt like that so often. Very well written, not all those filler words, just straight to the point with great time and smooth transitions. 8/9 The Rater's Guild

2007-05-28 Taylor: Thank you. Free verse can really kill me at times but I like how it turned out. Probably one of my favorites that I've written so far.