2007-04-25 kumquat: 2007-04-25 Taylor: I would love to read yours sometime![Taylor]: 628.Poetry.Mir
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Tell me all the things I have to do
A taunting reflection of what I could be
Could you tell me what you see?
I envy you, in all your perfection
Looking upon my distorted reflection
:D I have a poem with this name!
Yours is better though :/ :)
I loved it, it's short and sweet,
but there's lots of raw emotion
packed in there.
I'm trying to make my poems shorter with not too much detail, that seems to drag it out. I think they're starting to turn out real well though.
Thank you. :)