2007-02-16 kumquat: [dark starlight]: 640..Inject the Venom Now
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Find me crumpled beneath pillows of broken love,
Pricking my skin with infidelity,
Lie,
Feeding off agony oozing out.
Laughing so sardonically..
To haunt dreams and creep under your window.
To kill your dog while you sleep,
And slit the ties fought to keep.
What would pay penance
For the Ultimate Betrayal?
Sweep away the mark of This?
Certainly not the lips of Sinner.
My prince of soft whispered Desertion.
Combusting into sobs for the thousandth time this moment.
Retention rendering tears broiling face-flesh.
You will not weep in hopelessness.
Caressing her thighs, lips, breast.
Declaring the same vows and sinking your teeth further into my heart,
Curling more into fetal position.
To stop the growing ulcers from eating me,
My never-ending stomach of bile.
Grasping tightly to your smell,
Voice,
My massacre of adulation.
Yearning thrice over to hold the spot in your arms,
The space between your lungs,
To be the blood pulsating roughly through your body,
To hold the knowledge of your touch,
Breathing.
Echo's loss all over.
Not only is that
brilliantly descriptive,
It's absoltely Beautiful :]
I'd say well done...
But It might sound patronising?
xxxloafxxx