(Tsubasa wa ii ne! Toberu kara!)I especially get pangs when I'm revising the earlier sections, but my real problem is that I find myself wanting to use the character later but oops! They're dead! Actually though, the story I'm talking about is up now in its current incomplete form under my writings on my presentation under the title The Sankei Chronicles if you're at all interested in checking it out. I always appreciate the creative criticism.