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2006-07-31 Marten: It reminds me of a haiku a little. I think of pictures and not in the normal progression of poetry. It evokes a feeling instead of a thought. Well done. 2007-03-19 Jenna Rose: Nice work! It is rather like a haiku.[La Divina]: 115.Halloween
Rating: 0.30 Uploaded by: Created: 2005-10-11 03:36:02Previous:Keywords: autumn happyStyle:poetryHalloween
I run through the falling leaves,
Trying to catch one.
My feet on the sleepy green grass,
Hair tumbling loose.
A rain of russet and gold,
The echos of a cadence in my ear.
My heart dances.