2007-02-09 kumquat: 2007-03-21 Jenna Rose: When I read the title, I never expected the poem to be what it is... But it's very good. Sad in a way.[Calann]: 135.Poetry.Swe
Rating: 0.20
Don't ask...
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Tear your way out
demon child, abomination
like your maker tore his way in
betraying naïve trust
wounded beyond repair
and left
Out with you, get out
rip me open with claws and teeth
make your first kill, son of a blood-stained man
This hatred knows no limits
my womb might be forever defiled but
you cannot be allowed to born.
wow.
and oh my gosh.
That is fantastic,
because the title
lulls you into false security...
I shant comment any more
of your poems because I expect
I'm getting a little annoying :S
But, without sounding like
a right geek...
I think you're brilliant :]
xxxloafxxx