2007-02-09 kumquat: [Calann]: 135.Poetry.Ver
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A highly personal poem, depicting my emotions at that time.
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Like a ropedancer
afraid of heights
standing frozen in darkness
s h i v e r i n g
simply waiting to lose
the frail balance
and through the spotlight
fall
down
finally s h a t t e r .
I find your poetry delightful.
I've always stuck to a typical
rhyming format, and so at the moment
anything that breaks the mould
really excites me!
Therefore I find your poetry...
Beyond beautiful :]
I'd say 'well done' but
It'd sound patronising :S
xxxloafxxx