[Burning Inside]: 233.100 words

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2006-01-24 20:11:47
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As a virus floating through bits of ram infecting computers.
Such things akin to life and death never occur too ones mind. Endless plains,
vast oceans, along with open skies, never occur in me. Only things that roam
mind are; eat memory, how I infect data. People imagine the opportunities they shall
have over time. When transferring between two users, brain thinks “Happy”.
But “fun” would cycle homemade processed memory, if walking could happen for viruses like myself.
Walks be left towards persons having legs. Now destroying work, stored on hard drives will satisfy. He said, im flabbergasted! DONE!

© Steven Stewart 2006

2006-01-11 Mister Saint: Very trippy. Though you've used a few words twice. 'To' and 'When'.

2006-01-11 Burning Inside: nooooooo dam messed up on my check, well then back to Word it is

2006-01-11 chuchutrain: lol ^^ good try though and it is very cool anyways ^^

2006-01-11 Burning Inside: well thank you and its fixed now btw

2006-01-19 Kaimee: 'like' has been used twice, you might want to check the whole thing again carefully ^^;

2006-01-19 shadow in the midst: wow... is it just me or do ppl seem to be doing ^^ more often??

2006-01-20 Burning Inside: yea its fun to do ^^

2006-01-20 shadow in the midst: pff but why do ^^ when you can do :P??

2006-01-21 Burning Inside: because :P isn't as cool ^^

2006-01-21 shadow in the midst: :O ouch. thats like my logo online!! well i think its just cuz u guys feel too intimidated when ppl use :P so its like maybe an unwritten code

2006-01-21 Burning Inside: no I tell people to use :P over :P but I like using ^^ more when talking

2006-01-24 shadow in the midst: ... u tell ppl to use :P?? wow u must talk to ppl alot to come around to a convo about using :P over ^^.... *comes back few minutes later:lol i just got the irony in this*

2006-01-24 Burning Inside: lmao, bravo jenny ^^

2006-01-24 DorianP: "my" has been used several times.

2006-01-24 Burning Inside: my was used twice, and was used twice, now there should be none....this is making me mad, i suck at this...

2006-01-24 Burning Inside: AAARGHHHHHHHH more mistakes....this is really bad, but more mistakes are corrected hopefully now its not bad

2006-01-24 Burning Inside: ....OMFG....i suck this story sucks, i can't do this, but i can't quit, id get shot.....aaargh more mistakes to fix

2006-01-24 Burning Inside: ok there I can't find anymore at the moment at least, if people find any please tell

2006-01-24 shadow in the midst: lol well it sounds like ur going the least bit insane:P:P

2006-01-25 Burning Inside: long gone from that


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