[mousepoet]: 243.mousey's Poetry.Humility

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2006-02-08 02:40:05
 
Keywords:
free verse
Humility
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poetry
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Free for reading
Humility is striding down the street.
He thinks my breeches
are a size too big for comfort,
and my head makes me top-heavy.

I need some letting down.
I need to fight, and lose.
Anyone for a bit of boxing?
Want to kick me while I’m down?
My ego needs a bruise.

I can bite the hand
that feeds me,
but I can’t turn the other cheek.
I am not timid, nor meek.

Between those two is a truth
that I cannot forget
or reach,
no matter how many miles
I carry a soldier’s pack.

2006-02-07 kileaiya: Oh! I like this. The first stanza makes me happy. *apologizes for being horrible at commenting*

2006-02-07 mousepoet: Thanks bunches! No need to apologize.


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