[~*Lonely Wanderer*~]: 264.Feelings of the strong

2006-05-07 Romance and Cigarettes: Thats really good. I like the short sentence thingys like ''to suffer'' ''to take'' thats good effect. I like this bit : Would it be wrong to never open up my eyes
To allow my heart the freedom to speak
Say that I have the right to be my own person
To rebel against all obstacles
And make the toughest choices
I never wanted to hate
Thats good ^^

2006-06-01 iippo: I like this. Just a question, though: was it a conscious choice not to use any punctuation? It tends to confuse me a little when reading, not knowing where the pause is meant to be, etc...

2006-06-01 ~*Lonely Wanderer*~: It's meant to flow iippo. I don't use periods when I write poetry. For stories and other things yes, but poems, no.

2006-06-02 iippo: Alright thanks for explaining. I'm just punctuation-dependent I guess :) *has trauma of a boy reading out loud in class without ever taking a moment to breathe* :D

2006-06-02 ~*Lonely Wanderer*~: lol nah its cool i understand :P