[~Lonely Wanderer~]: 264.Her Life

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~*Lonely Wanderer*~

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2006-01-29 15:56:07

[~*Lonely Wanderer*~]: 264.Crimson Time

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[~*Lonely Wanderer*~]: 264.The Other Side

Keywords:

Poem, Short, self infliction is involved. Do not read if you think you'll be offended

About a girl, read for the rest and it is a poem. Story is here too

Genre:

Childrens

Style:

poetry

License:

Free for reading

A girl who was afraid of the chances she should take
Tears that flow from her eyes
Water that takes her by surprise
Is it another mistake
Should she leap to fate
Or cower and hide
Be bound in chains like her life
Should she fight to be free
Or obey her elders see,
When she cries at night
It makes the bleeding harder to pass by
Why? The question never answered
Or the question never tamed
This is me I cry
And Lonely is my name

2006-02-04 grushaj: Pretty good! I liked the imagery, as you can get inside her feelings and emotions. Very well done, keep it up.

2006-03-05 Eloura: Vey good. Very discriptive. Kinda wants one to want to know more.

2006-03-05 ~*Lonely Wanderer*~: Thanks but to get an inside description this is the poem for the story called the other side make sure you read it! :D

2006-03-29 Eloura: *smiles and says* Also another good story by you jenn.

[~*Lonely Wanderer*~]: 264.Her Life

[~Lonely Wanderer~]: 264.Her Life