2006-01-28 Freak in the Corner: this is beautiful. great job on it, you have some talent. 2006-01-28 shadow in the midst: thanks:P i appreciate it:P[shadow in the midst]: 279.poetry
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tears burning to the tip of her nose
the death of warmth; death of love
the flower unto which thorns arose
swaying to the beat of comfort
her breath singing a forgotten tune
the sentence of her ceaseless destruction
the fault of her life's ruin
hinges have broken, bridges have burned
life now rests on slings of cotton
a voice now testing its true revulsion
speaks to her, "have you forgotten?"