2007-05-26 Mister Saint: o.o Enthusiasm is fun! This is so bouncy. 2007-05-28 RiddleRose: teehee! scarily enough, i'm a lot like this in person a lot of the time... XD 2007-05-29 Mister Saint: That sounds more fun than scary, ya know. 2007-05-29 RiddleRose: well i always thought so, but i am told that my excessive cheerfulness is intimidating. so you know, by popular vote i am apparently not right in the emotions. that's okay by me though, i'm still happy! 2007-12-01 Tyr Zalo Hawk: The first stanza is defintily my favorite: 'like a billy/goat' XD it truly rocked my socks. 2007-12-02 RiddleRose: haha... well yes. i was feeling a little silly when i wrote this one.[RiddleRose]: 298.Poetry.Sil
Rating: 0.40
Wandering around like a billy
goat,
looking for rhymes
in words for mimes,
mask whiteface whistle-blow,
spin spin hop!
Tried to find a cat in a box,
wanted to try out that old paradox
yes,
thought it was a good plan
but not for an old man,
fall over trip on stairs,
bump bump plop!
Down to the pond to find a frog,
uh-oh got lost in the old bog
yipe!
gotta find a night-light
there'll be a light-fight,
ouch oooh that hurt,
help help cop!
Maybe in a few years,
we'll all have grown eighty more ears
ha!
better get a punchline
so the joke'll look fine,
laugh live fun play,
bing bing bop!
Otherwise, a very interesting poem. Nothing I'd nominate as 'deep,' but amusing ^_^ which is always a plus.
and really, a lot of my poems aren't particularly deep. i just enjoy making them silly and fun! ^-^