[Sunrose]: 3.Poetic Delusions

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2005-05-20 23:57:27
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poetry
Poetic Delusions
My hand reaches out to touch your face
Softly and tensed my fingers run down your cheek
I try to stop them from shaking
Feeling your skin with the tips of my senses
Enchanted I loose track of time and place
Loosing track of who I am, drowning myself in all your being
Such a grand being you are
Your gentle and omnipresent light warms my heart
Closing your eyes you wrap your hand around mine
As we both sigh experiencing the tension
Our connection grows stronger and I take in your every move
Shivers run down my spine when my hand slides towards your lips
What I feel is beyond me, I lost control
You stole my heart as I gave you my all
Unconditionally I plunge myself in your waters
With the faith I will stay afloat
Will it be like this?

All my loving I want to give to you.


Written: 2004-10-21

2005-06-15 Stephen: Hey, this one is cool! And, unlike a lot of poetry, if doesn't say you want to die ^_^

2005-06-15 Sunrose: That's because I don't want to die :P

2005-06-15 Stephen: That's even better, lol. You better not die, we would lose another EP warden...

2005-06-15 Sunrose: The world wouldn't end though if that happened :)
But thanks for putting your concerns for EP over me being dead :P

2005-06-17 Stephen: Err... I would be sad if you died, of course.

2005-06-18 Sunrose: Too late, I know now what your priorities are :P

2005-07-02 Stephen: *Has no idea what to say* Err... *hugs*!

2006-09-10 Marten: Awesome poem, the last two were also of course, but this one seems to be brimming over with love.

2006-09-11 Sunrose: I'm glad you like it *^_^*


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