[Sunrose]: 3.Scent of sour sweet memories

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2005-05-27 15:28:27
Keywords:
Valentine contest entry
Genre:
Comedy
Style:
poetry
Scent of sour sweet memories
Chilling is the winter breeze
Filling my lungs with air of crystals
Exhaling little fluffy clouds
Failing to take hold of their existence
Dreams in my lap where you rest
Seems blessed with sleep your weary head

Musical rhythms fill the room
Natural vibes connect to the melody
Dancing to a moonlit tune
Glancing through my eyelashes
Our hands clutched together
Sour sweetness left behind

Scent of memories is what I have
Meant to comfort me
Protect me from unhappiness
Affect the confused mind
Learning what I want
Yearning for answers of love


Written: 2005-01-31

2005-05-27 Kidnero: Lovely, but sad. Not the ordinary Valentine poetry.

2005-05-27 Sunrose: Thank you! ^_^ ..why do you feel it is not ordinary? :)

2005-06-11 Morningstar Rising: haunting, yet beautiful

2005-06-11 Sunrose: Ahw thanks! ^_^

2005-07-14 Stephen: Wow... I think this one is my fav of your poems... really good


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