2006-08-25 shadow in the midst: I really enjoy the first stanza there's really just a good flow to it. I havent read the scarlet letter however so perhaps that's why I dont find the other stanza's so appealing. 2006-09-09 Fireheart: Hahaha, yeah well in a nutshell the book is about a lady who hasn't seen her husband in years, and so she has an affair with another guy and her husband returns, and then sees that she's got a child, andhe vows to hunt down the guy who she's in love with and everything then ends up all twisted and dark. 2007-02-14 Jenna Rose: Pretty :)[Fireheart]: 318.Poetry.Emo
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I see the twisting, severed lies
the edge of sanity has been reached;
the walls of my locked-up mind breached
come back, come back, to me my dear
you know something I do not
you plan to leave me here to rot
Never will his poor soul rest
I plan to keep him locked away
to hide my pain from you, I say
without you, the world is cold
if there's nothing I can do...
maybe I should fade away, too.