[Eloura]: 341.Five Word contest.2007-five words-October

   A misty wind rolls through the air. I was at the park with my little girl. Her name at the time was Neshu. I was so happy with my little girl. Growing up so strong. It never occured to me that she might be anything else. A gostly whisper comes through the air "Come now you are not serious, you known for years something odd would happen this all hallows eve the voices fades away

     Shivers not from cold but worry. I watch neshu go down the slide and know that i need to cheer up so i won't be miss Grumpy as my daughter will tell me at times. She soon goes to the swings and i go over to push
her.

     While pushing her i noticed that ther was someone watching us through the chain link fence and instantly grab hold of my daughter worried that we stayed out to long. That we stayed out far to long that we would be captured soon, and that it self scared me.

     I did what i could i ran. We ran past the giant drain hole in the ground. Past the Slides We ran past the swings, and out past the fencing.

    The next thing i know the shadowy creature took off with my daughter... it's been 2 months... and all i have left is her blue jacket from that night.

  Some interviewer asks Will you keep looking?

     Always

         ~end~




(i plan to take this into the beginning of my book it's perfect for what i plan. I hope you enjoyed it!)