[Eloura]: 341.Poems.Murder Me Now

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2007-10-08 12:37:29
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This poem i wrote back in 2006, on Christmas day. This story has many meanings behind it. I can only hope you shall enjoy it, and comment on it.




Murder me now
to your heart's content
for i'm already dead

i'v been dead
inside
for the longest time
I'd rather stay dead
than let my heart
come back to life
then die again.
So leave me now

before
i leave my heart
in the depth
of the night
beating
completly out of sight

I want to
tell you
that
I trusted you

then your tore
it in two
me poor heart
what did it ever do
to you

but then you
ripped it in two
leaving me
bleeding and broken
on the floor

killing me
in that process
that's how i'm
already dead

Yet you still wonder
how i live
that' easy
you crazy b****

I am the undead
born from a bite
my sister gave me
long ago
making me
vampiric.

Letting me kill you
would satisfy me
yet making you vampiric
would satisfy you
I will live a life as
a vampire
as nyou live your life
as a mortal

Only to know
i will haunt you
in the depth of the night
causing you fright
and pain of
your soul
being ripped out
each time you catch sight of me

This is what you get
for messing with the undead
auseing them to feel
anything
letting myself trust you was wrong
but your nightmare will cause
you more pain
than i would ever give you

I shalln't feed upon your feeble body
making you strong
no
I will weaken you

For I'm the undead
the pain i'll spread
will be that
of pure torture

I am the undead
or as many say
the living dead

2008-07-20 bloody kisses: Wow, this was beautiful, and perky in a down way. It's very brillaint.

Uh, basically I liked it lol. I love how you have it set into somewhat of a prose but still freewritten stance - it looks like there's nothing left to lose.

*leaves brownies* ^.^

2008-07-21 Eloura: *chis* :::^.^::: Thank you!!! *big smile* I'm glad you liked it!


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