[nikole.sarina]: 552.Poems.Blackheart

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2006-10-18 19:21:25
 
Keywords:
A Blackened Bleeding Heart
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poetry
A Blackened Beating Heart

Beating fast and furious,
Beating inside my chest,
My blackened beating heart
is not ready to rest.

Starting off so pure and beautiful
Starting off so strong
My blackened beating heart
has beat so hard for so long.

A blackened beating heart
Pounds inside of me
A blackened beating heart
Long since unable to bleed.

A blackened beating heart
Getting blacker every day
A blackened beating heart
Blacker and blacker...

My blackened beating heart,
deep inside of me
My blackened beating heart
When will I be free?

2006-10-20 Nell: I like the rythm! And, for me, it seems to make the words speed up.

2006-10-22 nikole.sarina: thankees ^^ i like comments on my work. it helps me to write better


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