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2007-01-02 TheMHasSpoken: Ok, yes, if you caught me submitting this twice, let me explain. I am new and I was looking at other people’s writings and how wonderfully organized they were. And I looked at my own and well, grimaced at what a mess they are, so since I don’t know if there is a way to move things around, I’m just resubmitting things so everything is in order. This also means I loose the only comment I have received. Drat. So, yes, I’m not being an attention whore and trying to put my stuff in the recent writing section as much as I can so I’ll be noticed. Oh, hell no. [TheMHasSpoken]: 599.M Jives- Poetry.The Skeleton
Rating: 0.35 Uploaded by: Created: 2007-01-02 19:41:30 Keywords: Genre:AngstStyle:poetryHe laid cracked-
Fragmented,
His mouth wide open
With an endless stare.
It seemed rude of him,
There, looking at me.
So I turned his face
Into the earth
And he laid there-
Accepting it.
Scowling I watched
His motionless sulking-
Wished he would move.
Discontent, I left him
To his own devices,
Lying on the ground
Wishing someone would care.