[Cee]: 609.Elegy

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2007-12-10 05:16:40
 
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Elegy
Elegy
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My days spent in lonely exhile,
My nights lament my life.
My carefree spirit, erstwhile
Now awaits the glory of the night.

My youth is too soon gone,
My wreckless passion has found its death.
I try to sing my elegiac song,
Words without melody are all that's left.

2007-05-17 Eleanor: This is lovely. You’ve got some typos: exile (no “h”); and what does foinf mean? I love that last line, it really evokes a feeling of melancholy, of loss. Nice.


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