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2007-04-12 RiddleRose: the third and fourth lines have a few too many syllables... check the meter guide on unlazy poets and see if you can match it a little more perfectly. if you have any questions feel free to message me 2007-04-18 Samael_22: Yea thanks, I have it changed and flows much better now![Samael_22]: 619.Poetry.Fac
Rating: 0.65 Uploaded by: Created: 2007-04-20 18:38:38Keywords: face, crave, lymerick, poem, emotionA poem based off the memory of emotionStyle:poetryLicense:Free for private usageFace I Crave
Written by Derrick Doucet
It’s only the thought that I crave.
The thought of which for years I gave,
Into thy lovely face,
Which I now embrace.
The face in which you were so brave.