[Taylor]: 628.Poetry.Your face is an awkward silence

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2007-07-02 17:34:01

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For my friend Rachel, who's been getting messed with by a self-centered prick *cough*Matt*cough*.

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Angst

You’re in awe of a pixilated face
Saying you’re the one to make her heart race
You ignore the girl you can touch
To talk to her would be too close, too much
Make her feel like a disease
You say it makes her stronger, Oh please.
Someone’s stole her heart, you’re the crook
I hope you get strangled in that babbling brook
Love was meant to be gentle and kind
Not to be messed with by a twisted mind
I hope she knows there’s someone better than you
As for now, you’re ass is going to be eating my shoe.

2007-07-14 Emily: Comical, bitter, and basically true.

A nice piece; I'm not usually for rhyming poetry, but you've done well with this one. Well done.

2007-07-15 Taylor: Thank you :)

I'm starting to write alot more free verse -nods- Rhyming gets a little frustrating after a while.

2007-08-05 Hook_in_Mouth: Taylor, I love you. Thanks again. :)

2007-08-06 Taylor: Awwes, you're welcome. Anytime ;3