2007-04-30 mousepoet: I love this, especially the second movement. Beautiful and sweet.[Laika]: 661.Contest Entries.Concer
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1st movement - Woumb
and you never could imagine
how empty the normal stage can feel
at night a tiny heart beats in your head
it's an echo
tired and fading
2nd movement - Why I speak so low
eskimos have dozens of words for white
I have only one for you
and that needs to be whispered silently like the end
or good night
or death
3rd movement - Barabbas
this is my only hope
carve a cross from a branch the sun hits first
nail your wrists onto it
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Explanations: This set focuses on the dark side, endings and such. I also tried to keep it short, this time.
1st movement - broken relationship of a mother and a child who never lived
2nd movement - the longing after a relationship gone, the moment when you know you can only give up
3rd movement - sacrificing yourself for someone else makes a strong bond