2008-03-04 Catalyst: This is really good(for me anyway!) 2008-03-04 AuroraLumos: hehe thanks ^.^ 2008-03-18 Jenna Rose: I really like this. I can picture each line in my head - very good! 2008-03-18 Eyudo: WOW, *SPEECHLESS* VERY DEEP AND MYSTERIOUS.... 2008-03-21 AuroraLumos: lol... I have carried it on a bit, I won't put it up yet though, I'll finish it first... it's getting long![AuroraLumos]: 733.WolfFire
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I do promise to get some decent prose up here soon! I'm currently writing something that I think I will put up (fingers x)...
anyway enough of my babbleing... it's not what this page is for!
I hope you enjoy reading this!
Once again a restless night,
The waking and the dreaming fight,
Amidst the fire in the South,
A mother holds in its mouth,
A cub so small it cannot begin,
To understand the world it’s in,
It stays close by the mother’s side,
Until it has to run and hide,
Hiding from the endless fight
Fought by the wolves in firelight.
I did think about making it longer but that is about the longest verse I can do without it starting to sound really stupid XD
I LIKE IT.....