[Amethyst]: 743.Prisoner

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2008-04-07 20:52:04
Keywords:
poetry
Prisoner
Genre:
Angst
Style:
poetry
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Free for reading
I'm happy when I'm away from your raft,
But the closer I get to it I shiver with fear.
I wish you would let me wander away from
your dark cells.
I wish you would take away the heavy chains
that hold me in place.
Your prison is full of darkness and evil,
but mine is full of more things than the others.
It makes my skin grow dull and lifeless.
Soon I will be like all the others.
Soon I will be someone with no feelings or a voice.
Soon I will be just another collection in your prison.

2008-04-07 bloody kisses: Wow, this one's good. You can feel all the emotion and slight dread.

^.^ Awesome!!!

2008-04-08 Eyudo: heh, almost fake realism, just as long as it never really happens to us *shivers*

2008-04-08 Amethyst: i would be scared if it did. i like to use objects and sometimes people as my subjects. if u read all of them u will see that. i like to create something that people can feel and see as something they've felt. its kinda weird but my poems are my vents.

2008-05-16 AuroraLumos: I know what you men when you say poems are your vents ^_^ It's the same with me.... I tend to write a lot when I'm angry or upset.


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