[Evolution X]: 771.Five words.love of the sport

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2008-09-29 17:31:52
 
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Love of the sport
Baseball
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short story
The entirety of the stands rose to their feet as the batter stepped into the swing; baseball met wooden bat, the secret language of leather on metal ringing out the fact it was a perfect hit. The players on the field straightened up to watch the mere speck in the distant view, the only thing remaining that showed thereā€™d even been a baseball in the park.

2008-09-29 Eleanor: Well done. You've bolded speck instead of mere. You might want to fix that for the contest.

2008-09-29 Evolution X: whoopsy


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