Recently I have written a very short story based upon the legend of the sirens. However, I'm not completely happy with it, and was hoping a few people would be willing to read it and make a few suggestions as to what they liked and what they did not. Suggestions are more than welcome. Thank you :)

You can post it in your house and link it from your Note or even in your description. Also, if you have any friends, ask if they'll take a good look for you. Lots of ways to promote it!

There is also a rule that I generally follow, "If you read and critique my story, I'll read and critique yours." So go around and comment on other people's and see what happens!