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2007-05-24 01:08:47

Last author: Eleanor
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[I came up with this...uh...delightful random song today while trying to dodge my teacher's lecture on the exams that i've been hearing since 2nd grade. I'm having problems finding a title...i've never had to come up with one when i just strung random lyrics together, seeing as how i've never done that before. So help?]

The path I need to take,
Lies too far away.
My heart will drift away,
In a day.

Show me the light,
Enter sight.
You will smite.

Just let me go...

I see that devil smile,
It hides in fire.
Wants to take my soul.

I see the soul reaper;
Broken hearts' keeper.
Won't let me go.

Hold me in your iron grasp.
Expell my last breath in a gasp.
This life will not last,
Stop trying to get past...

Open my eyes.
Cover so many lies.

[5/21/07]

2007-05-24 [Eleanor]: I corrected a typo for you in the second line: you had “to” and I changed it to “too”. Tell me more about what is behind this song, what inspired you. I can’t get a proper feel for it to suggest a title just yet. I need to know more about what you were thinking when you wrote it.

2007-05-24 [Eleanor]: Actually, upon rereading it, I think “Soul Reaper” would be a good title.

2007-05-24 [bloody kisses]: Hehe, thankies! And especially for the typo, I knew something looked wrong there. I was thinking that but I wasn't sure if I'd sound stupid for it, "Sould Reaper" but now that someone else said it, yay! I'm not stupid ^.^ And by the way, there wasn't really anything behind this one, I just strung some lines together...

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