 | Entrance | Main | Wiki | List of forums | The Writings |
[RiverStar]: 149.Life With Death 01
Rating: 0.00 Uploaded by: Created: 2005-08-14 21:43:30 Keywords: Life With Death - Chapter 01 - Night-Time Bed ThiefGenre:BiographicalStyle:novelLicense:Free for readingAn idea I am working on. This is just a draft of the first chapter. I'm still not to sure where I am taking this, so it may change often before I settle on what I am doing. But for now here it is and I would love to hear more on what you think about it.
2006-02-28 SleepingDragon: Ok, I totally didn't see that coming. Nice job with the suprise ending.
Is incite the word you were wanting or insight? I'm not sure because of the context.
Very well written though. Kept my attention throughout. Nice pacing.
2006-02-28 RiverStar: Thanks for comment. I'm not sure about that word at this minute. I will have to go back and check.