[Jenna Rose]: 150.Poetry.You're Not Here

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2007-03-25 23:15:27
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Well... I dunno if this is a work in progress or not. I like it like this, but I may work on it more, making it longer.



You're Not Here
Copyright © Jennifer J. Radford

I have friends that love me,
and a family that cares.
I’m fine with how I look
- body, face, and hair.
The only thing that’s missing is you;
You’re not here...
I don’t know what to do...
You’ve moved on,
but I just can’t get over you.


2007-03-09 kumquat:
I like it because it's
simple and straightforward.
Sometimes poems such as this,
written on bare emotion,
can seem unsubstantial when
you re-read them.
But from my experience,you
shouldn't try and change it;
You might ruin the purity of it.

That's just my opinion,
so sorry if it seems I'm
talking crap >.<

xxlindenxx


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