[Burning Inside]: 233.Comical Random

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There once was moose in the town of Toose.
The moose stood there all day, looking away
One man came up and said he divorce
The man felt so stupid, since he was talking to a horse
The moose stood there still, looking up towards the hill
Until the day when she came by, along with a sigh
The moose melted away, there was nothing to say
Chocolate made it, But there was a slit
The sun took it away, in the month of May.
It was the main attraction, now its just a distraction
The people were so stupid, but soon they could make a chocolate cupid.
Have a new design, not to me like mine
No more moose, in the town of Toose
There is only a puddle, a man with a stubble.

2006-08-16 Emily: Chocolate cupid... that's an idea-basher-inner.

Nice little poem, very cute. I'm not one much for poem (I was expecting a story :(), but I read and now I comment.

Poor little man.


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