2006-01-25 ~*Lonely Wanderer*~: This is a wonderful piece of poetry. You've done everything in it that I could only try to do. This was wonderful to read. 2006-01-26 Velvet: wonderful! ^^ 2006-12-05 Ethan Leon: Hey I like it, I dangle in the reaches of athiesm so I especially like the parts reffering to religion. You mispelled "barren" as "baron" but hey we all make mistakes[Freak in the Corner]: 258.Random Poetry
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Sanity hanging over the edge,
Let the blade enter your skin.
Scream all you want,
Just let it in.
Blood from your heart and hands,
Red is the color.
And you cannot come out,
The light only hurts you more.
To reach God’s fucked divinity,
Don’t let your courage sell out now.
Harmful harmony to which they deliver,
To no false profit shall you bow.
Fuck religion,
Fuck it all.
Because nobody cares,
How far you fall.
So go on kid,
Pick up that knife.
Nobody’s watching,
So just end your life.
Don’t worry about the pain,
Because in the end it goes away.
After all,
Nobody’s sane.
You’re all guilty of using someone,
Or is someone using us?
In the name of friendship,
Love,
Or lust.
So hide your emotions,
Within yourself.
Leave everything you’ve ever felt,
Lay upon the back of someone else.
And when your soul becomes,
A baron wasteland.
Remember I’m still there,
To hold your hand.
I’ll make it possible,
For you to feel again.
This isn’t another,
Devious deception.
Think of this,
As your redemption.
Sincerely, ~Jenn