[Petals of the Reincarnate]: 612.Entry

Rating: 0.90  
Created:
2007-06-02 09:07:52
Keywords:
Dancer, canvas
Dancer
Style:
poetry
License:
Free for reading
Dancer

Canvas
upon thy stage
awash with slender grace
curtain falls and happy mask's fall
sad face

2007-06-01 Morningstar Rising: very nice.

2007-06-02 Petals of the Reincarnate: Thank you very much!

2007-06-02 Jenna Rose: This is beautiful ^^
But, shouldn't either mask or fall have an "s" on the end?

2007-06-02 Petals of the Reincarnate: Oh yes. Thank you very much for pointing that out to me :) I will go fix this.

2007-06-04 Morningstar Rising: welcome.


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