2006-12-25 iippo: Beautiful, I would like to see this continue or be elaborated on. :)[Petals of the Reincarnate]: 612.Paper Life- Pieces of the puzzle (A sample.)
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One which origionally lived and breathed.
It gave us air in life, it gave us warmth and shelter, and even now, in death, it represents life. It is a creator in it's own right, a pallet, a surface, a plateau which resonates our screaming emotion.
They are our children, concieved, nurtured, and carved into our own image, or of how we would like life to be.
Each ’child’ has a piece of our soul, our very own personal contribution, our collective soul D.N.A embedded into them.
Few typos, "originally" in the second line, and third line "in its own right" - no hyphen in "its".