[Laika]: 661.Contest Entries.FTLOL.November rose

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2007-07-30 10:33:46
 
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love is like a rose that bloomed in November
in my back yard, amongst the first snow
I saw it shining yellow, the delicate flower
and thought: what a foolish thing! to do,
blooming like that when every reason to has fallen
asleep, in deep slumber in their hives

my love for you is like that, nowadays
in full bloom for no reason
not knowing what's good for it
or me

2007-08-06 Jenna Rose: Good interpretation, nice idea for the theme ^^

2007-08-07 Laika: Thanks. ^^ I tried to approach it from some other angle than the most obvious sweet-but-has-thorns-thingy.

2007-08-26 Jenna Rose: To be honest, I've never thought of it in any way but the "sweet but has thorns". It's nice to see something on the more positive side.


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