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[Kuzco]: 212.Life is Hell
Rating: 0.00 Uploaded by: Created: 2006-01-10 22:41:51Previous:Keywords: mystic, religious, holy, mithology, hell, heaven, gods, heart, soul, spirit, reality, creation, universal, conflictLife is HellStyle:short storyLicense:Free for readingA boy accidently wakes up to reality and finds out the truth about it all.
2006-02-06 Emily: I know I sound repetitive, but what a great story :D. The conversations are always so intruiging in your works. I especially loved Virgin.
Now, despite the absolutely wonderful plot and tale and generally the very colourful characters, there were many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes... but an edit or some questions answered should take care of that problem. :)
And again, I highly suggest giving your characters some real actions and instead of using '-''s in your works, use ""s.
2006-02-06 Kuzco: I know I sound repetitive but I'm really glad you liked it! :P. Thanks for reading and for the crit.
I'll take care of the edit once I have time, but meanwhile "some questions answered" ---> what are you refering too exactly? I can surely answer them.
And I don't understand what you mean by giving my characters some real actions. And yes, I will start using ""s :)