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2006-05-07 Kiddalee: This is rather confident. I like that about it.[Kuzco]: 212.Rhimy things.Monolog
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Get a grip
It’s enough, don’t let it slip...
Drown in a mirage, an illusion.
Stay in the beach, screw the ocean.
Don’t mind the sea and search
The earth, your home sweet home.
Seize the day, now is the time
Get back on your feet,
get back to your life, let it shine.
My life belongs to me, it is mine.
It gives me the impression that one should try to be happy with their life, and not give theirself over to impossible dreams. I don't think it means that you shouldn't dream or work towards dreams; just not to get tied up in those you can't work towards. Maybe I'm just imposing my own experience onto your poem, though.
I think I would understand it better if it were organised differently. Then it would mean more to me.